Kia ora Magic, it's Abbie here from Grey Main School. I really like your simile poem about that lamb, you have used great metaphor language. Next time you could maybe make your sentence a little bit bigger. bye from Abbie.
Thank you for your lovely comment.Magic.
Kia ora Magic, it's Abbie here from Grey Main School. I really like your simile poem about that lamb, you have used great metaphor language. Next time you could maybe make your sentence a little bit bigger. bye from Abbie.
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