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Monday, June 19, 2017

Hooks

Hook Activity

A few weeks ago we started to write together in paragraphs using hooks e.g. one person would write something then the other person would write something, then they have to put them together to make one big story.






Nitro Circus.jpg
Wow!!! We all shouted as the motorbike did a backflip then it did afrontflip!
Fire busted out the back of the motorcycle. OMG they stood up on the motorcycle IN MID AIR!!!
The crowd roared with lion’s expression getting louder and louder. With a Bang and a Crunch they finished their act.

Too fast. I have lost control! The cars hit with great force shattering all the windows.
“My heart felt like it would burst out of my chest, I was so scared”                   
One car came from one, side another from the other.
It was like an explosion of one thousand sounds.
They hit from all angles like light bouncing off a mirror.
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Family Horse Riding Esterel Campsite - Cote d Azur, France… | Flickr
Have you ever had a horse ride? The horses trotted up the hill tilting me side to side.
The wind blew the grass like little waves in the sea on a cool spring day as the mountain stood proudly whispering to the wind.
It was relaxing whenever the horse walked
The forest sang like an angel and made us feel safe.


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