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Friday, June 24, 2016

Partly Cloudy

We watched a short video called Partly Cloudy. We had to write descriptive sentences using adverbs as sentence starters. Here is my writing.

Partly Cloudy
Softly the birds placed the baby down. “Waaa!!” cried the baby. Oh a baby. Happily the sun laughed as the birds delivered the baby animals. The cloud created life of baby animals.
Sadly the black cloud looked up at the pink clouds. Snap! went the crocodile. Cough, cough, cough. The bird flapped his burnt wings. “Aaaaa!” cried the bird. “Aaaaa!!!” cried the bird again. “Oh ah, sorry about that.” “It’s OK.” He was off with the bag. “I’m back” shouted the bird. Suddenly a shark formed. “I’m not delivering that,” shouted the bird. “I’m going to a different cloud.” The black cloud gained anger and sadness and sent down thunder and rain. ROAR! ROAR! Suddenly the bird came back with a bag. The bag was filled with armor and a helmet. “Nah i’m just kidding,” said the bird as he put on his armor.
“Come on” shouted the bird, "I need another animal to deliver."




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