Art Clay pot

My cup did not turn out like I wanted to. We made cups from clay because we find clay at the edge of the river.

Here is me making my clay pot.

hand writing

this is my term 2 hand writing sample my next goal is to take more care

  

I can type 9 words per minute.

Sea/Moana animals

I have been learning how to speak Maori and what some of the sea animals are in Maori.
I have liked trying to figure out the words for animals and reacting to whether I am wrong or right.

Narrative Writing

We have been learning how to write narratives. Here is a narrative I wrote.

Once upon a time just as the sun was going to sleep a tall young girl with a plane walked into the green meadow. The big old oak tree sat in the meadow. She threw the plane into the air. It did loops and twists.  

Suddenly it crashed into the soft leaves of an oak tree. She wondered about how she was going to get it down. Luckily her mother with long wavy hair and a beautiful face was watching from the kitchen window. She came out and climbed the old oak tree and rescued the plane.

Unfortunately the plane was broken, so they walked home and super glued it back together ready for the next fine day.

By magic

My swimming cameo

Autumn cameo.

The Writing Process

Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly.

        Use careful spelling and sounding out

WINTER

Winter blows its cold icy breath everywhere.

The early morning frost is crunchy and white covering the green grass.

The loud wind howls in the freezing air like a stray dog hungry for a bone.
Tiny snowflakes flutter down to land on the frozen ground,

covering everything with a white sparkling blanket.

The trees become bare, admiring the view.

Heavy rain falls from the dark grey sky, pounding against the soggy ground.

Chilly bitterness in the air, winter is here.

Here is my writing!

Autumn: DRAFT

Haaaa the nies worm mornings in Autumn Bye-bye Summer and hollow Autumn. As the seasons change the world is changing.The best thing I love about Autumn is all of the colors and the leaves, especially the leaves.

Autumn: Published

Haaaa! The crisp mornings in Autumn are awesome. Bye-bye Summer. It’s time for Autumn!!!. As the seasons change, the world changes. The best thing I love about Autumn is all of the colours and the leaves. I like making creations with the colourful autumn leaves.

Volcano Erupting

Here is my moment in time writing about a volcano erupting.

Wow!! The volcano filled with lava exposed like a geyser. The lava slowly came down. The lava was all over the volcano.  Burning hot rocks came crashing down the volcano. Lava was streaming down the volcano like a river. After the lava cooled down the lava turned into obsidian.