Narrative Writing

We have been learning how to write narratives. Here is a narrative I wrote.

Once upon a time just as the sun was going to sleep a tall young girl with a plane walked into the green meadow. The big old oak tree sat in the meadow. She threw the plane into the air. It did loops and twists.  

Suddenly it crashed into the soft leaves of an oak tree. She wondered about how she was going to get it down. Luckily her mother with long wavy hair and a beautiful face was watching from the kitchen window. She came out and climbed the old oak tree and rescued the plane.

Unfortunately the plane was broken, so they walked home and super glued it back together ready for the next fine day.

By magic