Autumn cameo.

The Writing Process

Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly.

        Use careful spelling and sounding out

WINTER

Winter blows its cold icy breath everywhere.

The early morning frost is crunchy and white covering the green grass.

The loud wind howls in the freezing air like a stray dog hungry for a bone.
Tiny snowflakes flutter down to land on the frozen ground,

covering everything with a white sparkling blanket.

The trees become bare, admiring the view.

Heavy rain falls from the dark grey sky, pounding against the soggy ground.

Chilly bitterness in the air, winter is here.

Here is my writing!

Autumn: DRAFT

Haaaa the nies worm mornings in Autumn Bye-bye Summer and hollow Autumn. As the seasons change the world is changing.The best thing I love about Autumn is all of the colors and the leaves, especially the leaves.

Autumn: Published

Haaaa! The crisp mornings in Autumn are awesome. Bye-bye Summer. It’s time for Autumn!!!. As the seasons change, the world changes. The best thing I love about Autumn is all of the colours and the leaves. I like making creations with the colourful autumn leaves.