Hi magic It's Isabella from may road school. I really like the one word poem! I have never seen a poem with just one word before that is so creative. It would also be nice if you could make the pictures a little bit bigger.
Hi Magic, I really like your post about magic poems. I learnt so much that you reminded me of when I did one but I did'int blog it and I did it on paper. I have a question about this poem can you pleas check that you read it because It was really hard for me to read the sentence's in the poem
Hi Magic, I really like your post about post poetry.Your post reminded me about when my other class made poems.I found it really interesting to that you made a poem in a slide.Was it hard making a poem? Were you tired? Maybe you could add a slide saying how you felt when you made the that poem at the end.Hope you had a good day today Bye. By Akosita at May Road School
I really like your post about poems. Your post reminded me of when I did a poem but it was on paper. What I found really interesting to read was the colour poem because I also like red and the red roses are my favourite! I learnt so much from your poems. What are your next steps? Maybe next time you could do one poem about your self.
Thank you for sharing your learning with all of us.
Hi magic
ReplyDeleteIt's Isabella from may road school. I really like the one word poem! I have never seen a poem with just one word before that is so creative. It would also be nice if you could make the pictures a little bit bigger.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your post about magic poems. I learnt so much that you reminded me of when I did one but I did'int blog it and I did it on paper. I have a question about this poem can you pleas check that you read it because It was really hard for me to read the sentence's in the poem
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Hi Magic,
ReplyDeleteI really like your post about post poetry.Your post reminded me about when my other class made poems.I found it really interesting to that you made a poem in a slide.Was it hard making a poem? Were you tired? Maybe you could add a slide saying how you felt when you made the that poem at the end.Hope you had a good day today Bye.
By Akosita at May Road School
Hi Magic
ReplyDeleteI really like your post about poems. Your post reminded me of when I did a poem but it was on paper. What I found really interesting to read was the colour poem because I also like red and the red roses are my favourite!
I learnt so much from your poems. What are your next steps? Maybe next time you could do one poem about your self.
Thank you for sharing your learning with all of us.
Regards by Jordyn.